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every last drop
chase the rain til it's gone
one one one one
now it's gone
it's gone
like the flame
chasing the dark til it's gone
two two two
lost count what's next
who who who
what's around the bend
who will I run into next
never know
never know
never know
dead end

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~ Brandan Michael.


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