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It's getting colder out
it's sad, getting drunk all alone
every breath might be your last
so breathe deep my friend
and drink until there's nothing left
the bottle's empty now
the bottom of the well
can be seen now from afar

it's so cold in here
see my breath hanging there
see my breath disappear above our heads
held together until the wind takes hold
it's so so cold now
so hold me close hold me still

~ Brandan Michael.

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