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Like manna, monsoons
deluge the sun-parched jungles
with torrents of rain.


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by Apple

RE: Monsoons
An enjoyable haiku; appreciated the symbolism and parallels of manna to rain; nicely conceived.


( Posted by: jjbreunig3 [Member] On: August 10, 2017 )

Good write
Very creative it is fine line what is haiku. This is good!
I have always thought haiku is about seasons. Poetry you can break any rules.
Keep up the good work!

( Posted by: louiemary [Member] On: August 21, 2017 )

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