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With the lightning and loud peals of thunder,
the livid-blue clouds rumble and boil
like a vat of churning, hot oil
as torrents of rain force Life
up from down under
the dry, desert soil.


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The following comments are for "The Storm"
by Apple

Very Good
I like the writing and the imagery of this poem. Good choice of words. Keep up the good work.

( Posted by: louiemary [Member] On: October 16, 2017 )

re: Very Good

( Posted by: Apple [Member] On: October 16, 2017 )

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