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As you fall I see you there
Lie after lie
As you slip I hear you swear
Lie after lie
You're the UnAmerican
Lie after lie

As you crawl I see you bare
Lie after lie
As you flip I see you dare
Lie after lie
You're the UnAmerican
Lie after lie

You're the UnAmerican
Lie after lie
You're the UnAmerican
Lie after lie
Lie after lie
Lie after lie


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