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Suddenly you come back to me
In a dream-like state.
It's like nothing ever changed.
It's as natural as
mother holding baby.
Troubling pasts evaporate
The ice caps never melted.

It becomes impossible to
Hold back tears of joy
And they flow like a river
Like gravity out to sea.
But tides drag me back
To bittersweet reality
Where I wake up weeping
Like a motherless child.

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