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26 Years laughter and tears
you were 18 I 24
two different worlds
many open doors

The ship we were on had no keel
drifting in an ocean
of heightened emotion

Fear and doubt not of you
But the world and future
of concrete and steel

consumed my mind
since I was a child
The whole invention
completely gone wild

I won’t say much here
though I can never give up
of the one thing you showed me
that filled my cup

I guess you’re confused
maybe not quite sure
could there be something
behind another door…..


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