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they are walking over my grave

they think - how lucky he is

he feels no pain


they are walking over my grave

they think - he has no worries

he has no bills to pay


they are walking over my grave

I cant move , I cant yell

I watch in silence


they are walking over my grave

I feel no joy , I feel no gain

I cry tears of dust


they are walking over my grave



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