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waking up next to you would be amazing
but I'm scared I'll wake up alone
I'll fall asleep in your arms
and dream a wonderful dream
and when I open my eyes
I'll see you didn't stay the night
and pain will fill my heart
and tears will paint my pillow
like the sidewalk when it rains
and I won't be able to sleep for days
knowing you caused this pain

so don't be surprised
when I don't ask you to stay the night

~ Brandan Michael.

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