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Dreams fragmented
and twisted
and bent
together with memories
trapped in my head
can't remember that
won't remember that
can never forget

I sleep a dead-mans sleep
stiff in a soft bed
drowning in tears
it all feels so real
my endless fears
I'll never conquer them
they'll rule me
until the bitter end

~ Brandan Michael.

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