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wind carries memories
of summers long forgotten

on gusts of summer air
and sunlight
your face comes to me
frozen in time

porcelain dolls
with cracks in their cheeks
and leaves in their hair
with broken hearts
bound together with lies

your eyes blank and vacant
within hides the truth
a trust betrayed
you'll never fall in love again
you'll only be fooled once

~ Brandan Michael.

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