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This rime that flows and rhymes
must throb with rhythmic time
to the beat and the chimes
of each line on the dime;

it must have lines and rows
that move with good meter
to feet of highs and lows
that's nice, tight and neater;

it, too, must be well-writ
with not so subtle song
that ev'n people hear it
in homes where they belong.

(Alas!—now more or less)
'Tis time to end this rime
with a farewell address:
"Adieu! Another time?"
I ask—so please say yes!

"To have the soul of a poet is to feel with the mind, and to think with the heart."

~Ngoc Nguyen~

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