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Walking on timelines
Searching for end points
Minds fallen by the wayside.

Call in the experts
For all that it's worth
Hoping there's some kind of
Ends to this...

Mean what you're saying
With half of us praying
We've got the excuses
To shift the blame.

How many times
Do you think history's cycled past
And how many moons
Since the suns dawn rays
Flash past your eyes
In the Big Bang again.
Cycles, futility.


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