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I'm conjuring more demons
Than I can face.

I gotta put an ocean between us
To get away from them.

Only to summon them up
In the next town I make home.

I can't go home.
There's too many demons.
They'll drag me back down
Under the oceans.

If there's one place
I can make home
And be in peace
It is not in this world.

I can't go home.
There's too many demons.
They'll drag me back down
Under the oceans.

But there's one place
I can make home.


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