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Spring blooms and colors burst
to life
the sun shines and rain
the hot sidewalk clean
of the childrens chalk

little girls
with little hopes
and fears
skipping down the street

little boys
with little hearts
and big bright eyes
run away from the cooties
chasing them

this is spring
this is spring
this is happening

now winter sleeps
as I wake from my hibernating

~ Brandan Michael.

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