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O Lord, once again, I have made a
conscious decision to set aside…
my ego and earthly plans to spend
quality time with You; as I strive

against the nonsense, troubling my
heart, allow your Holy Spirit to
cascade as a waterfall upon this
flesh, with the freshness of a new

dew that joyfully enhances my world
in unexpected ways. Overwhelm my soul
with an outpouring of Your Essence,
whereby the inward, God-shaped hole

in my heart is… filled by You alone!
On this path for me, I’ll freely roam
in search of songs and poetic verses
that lead me towards my Heavenly home.

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Inspired by:
Psa 42:7-8

Dedicated to Rev. Marilyn S. Glavin

Learn more about me and my poetry at:

By Joseph J. Breunig 3rd, © 2017, All rights reserved.

Logic, when applied to people, fails miserably!
--Joseph J. Breunig 3rd

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