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Dancing in the heavens
The planets are aligned
The stars are brightly shining
Can't get them off my mind.

Lying on this blanket
Gazing at the stars with you
For us to dance among them
Would be a dream come true

Lost in the stellar beauty
The night is forever young
The splendor that we're seeing
Has only just begun

You can Waltz with Cassiopeia
I will Tango with the Twins
Then we can walk the Little Dog
And Hand Jive with Pisces' fins.

Lets ride a comet to the sun
Then catch a falling star
It won't matter where it takes us
As long as I'm where you are

We'll take a ride to Venus
Neptune and Mercury
We'll swim in the big dipper
And live out our fantasies

Play hide-and-seek in the asteroid belt
Have lunch on "The god of War"
And after we visit Uranus
Off to Pluto we will soar

We cannot forget the moon
All the beauty that lies within
And oh how I love the northern star
When it shines against your skin

This has been the greatest adventure
You've given me more than moonbeams
Dancing with you in the heavens
Has exceeded my wildest dreams

Kenneth D. Woodard

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