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when we locked eyes
what a suprise
you hit the crystal in my mind
I had no idea
you were watching me
how how could it be
someone like you

how could see any love
in a man like me
i'd lived a life
a dark destiny
no light shining
as dark as dark
black as blue can be
still you came my way

lit up the day
showed me the way
a love so unfraid
with your special way
took me out of the shade
into the suns rays

yet i still swayed
in every direction
i made a mess of it all
banged my head on the walls
as you reached out
put your hand out
in my head id shout
what do you see in me

dark destiny
no light shining
dark as dark
black as blue can be
still you came my way
black as blue can be
still you came my way




------
poetricky


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