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The company of strangers, strangers in a way that I know nothing about. The very discovery of a new soul excites me. Leaving and having a discovery if a unknown. A new walk of a life. This my gentleman is where I feel alive.

Born again, make me feel so happy. My heart is jumping. Feeling of a new, this idea of life is addictive as a sugary caffeinated can packed with vitamins, taurine, dopamine releasing stimulants.

The cultures, lives to be discovered. History, reality, morals, and religions. The development of ideas and how people create ones ego, id, and super ego. So fascinating. My look in my eye listening to ones history is the very day I have been waiting for and beyond.

The empty heart when I'm alone with the very stories, pains me to know more. Boredom over comes, sparks of creativity overwhelm my senses and it's a book you love, you love, you love the literature but predictable. I love, I learned. History was had, what boredom, I love, the never known. Give me something new. Something new.

My life, yours alone. Do not explain. Eager to have a greater love I feel for you. The alone heart when one discovers a new soul. Call this the sweet song of a soul, white and black and to think, I can and will have your story. No greater story I wish to take from your soul. The ever knowing aloneness. Love. To be written, for what I take from you.

From what I take form you.
I want to stay in a story of the unknown.

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