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I lost my soul
before I was even born
I made a deal with the devil
to breathe, I gave up everything
to breathe, I gave up eternity
so here I am
broken
like all The Ones before
and here I am
missing
like all The Ones
who have yet to come

------
~ Brandan Michael.


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