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a wall of brick
a wall of bone
of blood and loss
of failure and broken trust

a wall to keep me safe
won't you keep me safe
will you stay away

a hundred feet high
never high enough
must go higher
and higher still

must fly only to fall
and crash and burn
a dead little bird

I built you up to tear you apart
won't you rip me apart
won't you rip out my heart

a wall
a wall
could never
keep you out

------
~ Brandan Michael.


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