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Got to keep the image up.
Money is like a new pup.
Intoxicated on beer and wine.
Cop outside - gave me a fine.
HOT DICE - fast rolling green.
WIFE and KIDS - I'm getting mean.
Got to recoup that loss.
What will I tell the boss ?
Books are a house of cards.
Fat belly - a jelly lard.
Glitter clown woman call on.
Faster and faster the night time.
HOLLYWOOD image falling down.
It's all an illusion.
I'M THE REAL CLOWN.

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SCRATCHES ON THE PAGE,
MAKING NOISE


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The following comments are for "GAMBLE HOLLYWOOD STYLE"
by poewhit

The Footwear of Clowns
we wear our shackles
like clown shoes...
when we stumble for the folly

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: January 26, 2017 )

Cards
Cards only play a certain deck
what house shall you choose
ones decisions are only what you read
you determine what you lose
then teach and plead
while observing all house of cards

( Posted by: NucleusFire [Member] On: February 23, 2017 )





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