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When will people observe,
the inner, poetic elegance…
of Christ Jesus in my life?

Does everyday nonsense of
my human routine, disguise
Him, while promoting strife?

Striving for self-control,
under an atmosphere of peace,
my spirit is subtly stirred

to honor my Lord; woven into
my life is His fabric of Truth,
that’s sustained by The Word.

Though I’m utterly imperfect,
my brokenness allows His Spirit
to quietly glide around me-

and touch the lives of those,
who seek to arise above the…
constraints of their humanity.
Author notes
Inspired by:
Gal 2:20

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By Joseph J. Breunig 3rd, © 2016, All rights reserved.

Logic, when applied to people, fails miserably!
--Joseph J. Breunig 3rd

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