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Polluted wonder in my life.
Swim I do, dead fish strife.
Tiny pipe - mercury asunder.
Hidden death, waters wonder.
Mixed a few a new invention.
Empty earth with no prevention.
Silent death - acid rain plunder.
Don't worry it's no blunder.
Lime song blues take it away.
Empty lake, brown grass sways.
Void earth erase all kind.
Start over, FLEA SIZE MIND.

from my poem book DREAMS

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SCRATCHES ON THE PAGE,
MAKING NOISE


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The following comments are for "SORRY EARTH"
by poewhit

The Introduction of Green
Earth...
is the big recycler...
Oh to be soylent green

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: January 13, 2017 )





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