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Atomic bombs - fast cams.
Hourglass time and sand.
Mankind in a jam.
Mega-bytes - big ram.
Just wont ever stop.
Mankind became a flop.
"Fallout knocking at the door".
Crackhead - aids baby - he's dead.
Acid rainwater melts the lead.
Atomic bombs, over city lands.
Prayer time, empty cans.
Dear GOD, I need a fix.
What is the rabbit hat trick.
A Frankenstein monster at home.
Closet hippy - beatnik - protest alone.
Free love - disco - poly cloths.
Aids - clap - syph - herps - and bombs.
Corporation man plunders - fire alarm.
Mad cows live down on the farm.
Bombs over city lands.
Cold beer sit buy the fan.
T.V. images fill empty heads.
WARS OVER - CD - COLD BEER - REDS.

from my poem book DREAMS 3


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SCRATCHES ON THE PAGE,
MAKING NOISE


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by poewhit

Where the Itch Meets the Scratch
not all riches come from plunder...
leaving poor folks
to scratch and wonder

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: January 13, 2017 )





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