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I feel your pain
in this world of plenty
I know the Heart
That's full yet empty
The Mind that sits
and waits for time
to pass the day
As fragments of life
tear and fray

you walk steady yet you sway
waiting for the final cut
A life so precious yet in a rut
scars no one can see
the deepest roots
of the tallest tree
so far under yet so high

the tears thats always in your eyes
smiling yet always cry
inside a mountian of love and joy
your conscience none can destroy

for you are you
and I am I
Kindred Spirits
Shall we fly
into the darkness
of the bright sky
kiss all this greyness
bitter sweet goodbye ?


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