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Though I've yet to gaze on your perfect face
or hear the sound of your sweet, gentle voice,
the thought of you enkindles my embrace
of our sure union in spite of Fate's choice.
I oft' envision your resplendent image,
to fondly picture an angelic vision
of you—a cherub with divine carriage
and a fluorescent halo that's so golden.
I am most in love with the thought of you,
that yet not e'en the spans of space and time
can thwart our meeting when our love means two—
I thus love you through this undying rhyme.
So abide with patience by trusting this—
that before long we'll ne'er another miss.

"To have the soul of a poet is to feel with the mind, and to think with the heart."

--Ngoc Nguyen

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The following comments are for "Against Fate Until Together We Are United In Love"
by Apple

Toothsome Fodder
Fate chooses
from a menu of fodder...
Bon appetit...!

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: October 21, 2016 )

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