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I am poor and needy.
My accusers have surrounded me with lies,
They see a man who has no intention on doing wickedness to goodness,
Therefore, in their wickedness they speak lies about me.
But, YOU, ADONAI, my GOD, are Worthy of Eternal Worship
And how Glorious is YOUR HOLY NAME.
Although my accusers have failed and will continue to fail in their
Filth and lies, they don't turn from their evil ways
For it is evil they so much love!
Accordingly, evil, false accusers, poverty and lies shall
Successfully pursue them.
Yet, by YOUR enduring Mercy towards me: love, compassion, wealth,
Truth, honor and joy shall pursue me.
"Oh, my HEAVENLY, RIGHTEOUS FATHER, ADONAI, nothing compares
To YOU, YOU WHO have no equal, and YOU ARE so Beautiful in
YOUR HOLINESS. So hurry, ADONAI, save me from the destruction
That awaits at noonday."

I Love YOU, ADONAI, always,
YOUR servant, David (Carlos)

I wrote what was inside of me, how do you like it?

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The following comments are for "A Psalm of David Sunday, October 2, 2016"
by skunk3632004

Call It An Installment On Enthrallment
is a blessing...
when we pay attention

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: October 18, 2016 )

"Call It An Installment On Enthrallment"
Dear "awhippingflame,"
Thank you.
Yes, poverty in my life has been "a blessing" and it took me a long time to "pay attention" to that. It has shown me a lot things and how the Glory of ADONAI Works in my life. Such as, GOD has Blessed me with the spirit of King David. Also, wealth will be a Blessing in my too because it will come from ADONAI (1 Chronicles 29:12).

By the way, how did like the poem?

Carlos (David)

( Posted by: skunk3632004 [Member] On: October 19, 2016 )

I Cut Myself on Poetry
for my assaults on poetry...
this is how I punish myself

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: October 19, 2016 )

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