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Questions hover about me
like fear and loathing bats
and all I can do is go through them
eyeballs quivering...
daemons, delusions and angels
dancing on the pin-point
of my prickling nerves-
as I take my hundredth ride
in Charon's revolving boat-
oh, the charmed and cursed life
of a 21st century ghost

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