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My beautiful lady,
I will wipe your tears,
If, you are near me.

I will speak tender words
To you if you will hear me.

I promise you that I
Will give you pleasure,
Hope and Love from the start...

If, only you were to
Accept my heart.

Ronald Peter Ciras

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