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Every road has a dead end
Every bruise, a story to tell

Nowhere to go
so sit down and
open your ears

listen to the tale trapped
under your powder skin
focus on the details
to find the Devil within

~ Brandan Michael.

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The following comments are for "Story By A Bruise"
by fbomber125

Dead-Ending the Heart
The Devil drives the in-roads...
to the Heart's dead end

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: August 24, 2016 )

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