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She smells of
Milk & Honey,
salvation on her lips.

I'll follow her
to Hell and back,
She is my Heaven.

~ Brandan Michael.

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The following comments are for "That Girl"
by fbomber125

My Sweaty Salvation
I find a little piece of Heaven
in every kiss from Hell...
when I spread the legs of salvation

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: August 23, 2016 )

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