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The Goddess Pele will make
life hot for you whether you love
her or fear her true

A/N written for a contest on another site

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The following comments are for "Fire Queen"
by chapter1

A Whipping Frenzy
the Queen of fire
is at the Heart of my desire...
whipping my flame into a frenzy

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: August 19, 2016 )

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