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you set fire to the night
And
fought off the dark sky.

you chased away the shadows
And
freed my ghostly prisoners.

And
I've never been more grateful.

so...
shine bright my inner star,
burn forever my little light.

And
save me from
the cold nights,
the dark sky.

never leave my side.

------
~ Brandan Michael.


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The following comments are for "My Star"
by fbomber125

Gratefully Without Darkness
Welcome...!
to the sunny life...!
You can thank your inner star

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: August 14, 2016 )

star
some days all I have is my inner star.

( Posted by: fbomber125 [Member] On: August 23, 2016 )





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