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so take my hand
let's leave this land
of hunger and disease

please take my hand
let us leave tonight
madness isn't far behind

to escape the darkness
to break the silence
we must dance
dance just dance

hand in hand
we spin spin spin
and spin spin spin
just spin spin spin

we dance and spin
dance and spin
around and around
and around again

~ Brandan Michael.

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The following comments are for "Dance and Spin"
by fbomber125

A Diet of Dance
I devour the dance floor
with original sauce...
leaving other dancers hungry

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: August 12, 2016 )

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