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banished to the darkness
the silence stalks its prey
a deer with headlight eyes
brighter than the sun, they shine
as your thoughts orbit the light

for a moment you see the end begin
as shadows whisper broken promises
their lips painted with seductive poison
hiding their ulterior motives
while dancing with the kiss of death

~ Brandan Michael.

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The following comments are for "Silent Dark"
by fbomber125

The Seduction of Death
I have a kiss for Death
on poisoned lips...
What could be more seductive...?

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: August 12, 2016 )

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