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A pink crescent moon
hangs in the latent dawn sky...
a gift from Charon

always, the waters
of the Styx surge below the
feet of ambition...

and visions appear
most bright and clear in the soft
lost liminal light

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The following comments are for "Riverman Haiku Set"
by seanspacey

Up the Ambition
if not for the foot of ambition...
there would be nothing up my ass

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: August 7, 2016 )

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