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Shards of Hearts, Shine
Scattered across the Pavement
Sharp, they Cut & Slash
Bleeding, Bloody feet Walk
Away, Away, always Away
leaving a Painful Path
of Destruction in their Wake

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~ Brandan Michael.


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The following comments are for "Glass Hearts"
by fbomber125

Take Another Piece of My Shards
It's the brittle Heart
that breaks like glass...
always leaving Love in shards...

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: August 5, 2016 )

Hmm
My tears turn to blood
Every time I'm cut
By love

( Posted by: fbomber125 [Member] On: August 9, 2016 )

A Time For Blood
Don't Hmmm me...!
Cut me with Love...!
And Make...Time...Bleed...!

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: August 14, 2016 )





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