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I dropped the ball
your heart breaks into pieces
is there a connection
did I win
late the sun drops
from the sky
and greets the night owls
out kickin' it in the crowds
never find your way out
it's here
it's now
there's a silence slowly
choking me
I can't breathe
can't scream
it's my fault I'm sorry
I let you down
I'm sorry I dropped the ball
punish me God please
punish me...

~ Brandan Michael.

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The following comments are for "Dropping"
by fbomber125

Kick It Like You Drop It
we kick it long...
we kick it strong...
we kickin' it to God's song

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: July 29, 2016 )

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