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Dandelion,
I blew you into the wind
to visit the four corners of the world
I promised to show you

Dandelion,
I set you free to come and go
I pulled you up by your roots
because freedom is all you ever wanted
and I promised, I promised

Dandelion,
I break your chains
I let you go, so go, go

Dan, I didn't lie,
I promised to show you the world
one way or another
so follow the wind
so follow your heart
so follow your bones
burnt to ash now

------
~ Brandan Michael.


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by fbomber125

A Sucking Wind
follow your Heart...
not the wind...
for a life that doesn't blow

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: July 22, 2016 )





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