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white knuckles
hands full of hair
hot blood red face
feet trapped in cement

about 5 seconds
that's all I have
about 5 seconds
before I lose my shit

about 5 seconds
lasting 25 to life

it's all come down to this

just 5 seconds
until I take
what I cannot
give back

and the cell door slams
no redemption

~ Brandan Michael.

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