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dirt road
beat up shoes
one foot in front of the other
now if I only knew where to go...

the bar is closed
neon signs
asleep for the night
street lights
my only guide...

I can't find
can't find
the stars in the sky
a blanket of darkness
hinders my sight...

stumbling blind into new love and old lies
it's all or nothing... live or die...

------
~ Brandan Michael.


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The following comments are for "live or die"
by fbomber125

The Why Nots of Life
we know where to go...
when we die...
why not in life...?

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: July 15, 2016 )





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