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There is an void
within me
always empty
an prison
were nothing goes in
it shifts
from time to time
in form and in place
but it is always there
no matter how many times
i smile
no matter how many times
i say i´m happy
it is always there
somewhere lurking
inside of me
and then
there it comes
spawning chains
from it´s immpregnatble walls
hooking it tight
within my flesh
the more i struggle
the stronger it becomes
i could hope
the chains become rusty
with time
hope is an fools errand
for this prison will never leave me

I´am shackled by it


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by Naijerana

A Prison of Inhibition
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is a prison break...!

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: July 12, 2016 )

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