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Life is pointless
pain and suffering
on and on
i ones heared
fake it, till you make it
i have been faking it
for to long
all i see now
is pointlessness
nothing is true
with the exception
of the pain in my heart
i can feel the shriek
within y heart

An shriek against living

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S.k


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by Naijerana

The Moolah Life
the richness of life...
is a measure of it's worth

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: July 11, 2016 )





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