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the
world
enchanted
thus
bittersweet
if
we break bread
with thee
not
one slice of it
but
we
shall
take the crumbs
and
embrace
thy faith in it


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The following comments are for "If We Break Bread With Thee"
by FireFly747

Piling On the Mayo
I break bread
with crumbling faith...
when I'm all out of mayo

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: July 12, 2016 )





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