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Angels Dancing in the Night
Angels Singing with delight
Angels spreeding wings

To protect you
from sufferings
Angels here
Angels there
Angels Everywhere

out of Sight
Yet not out of mind
Angels Always
Just in time

Dont give up
your not alone
Angels Work
for they are Prone

To Preen their wings
As Heaven Sings
their Song
upon your Shoulder

The Most brave
and Boulder.....

T.J. Poetricky.


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The following comments are for "Just in Time"
by Zeus

Lightly Dancing
with angels dancing
on my toes...
I'm lighter on my feet

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: July 7, 2016 )

As "Light" as Can Be
Completely weightless

( Posted by: Zeus [Member] On: March 3, 2017 )

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