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a
rain puddle
becomes
an
ocean storm
for
the
autumn leaves
and
we
sail along
our dreams
back home


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The following comments are for "An Ocean For Autumn"
by FireFly747

The Autumn Voyage
we sail the winds
of autumn Souls...
pushing past an ocean of muddle

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: July 7, 2016 )





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