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mama really
understood
all the open sky
of our imagination
to fly
when
we see
young autumn
with
all the maple leaves
in her
soft golden brown hair
and
her
face round and fair


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The following comments are for "Maple Leaves In Her Hair"
by FireFly747

Inspiration As Rocket Fuel
there are no boundaries
beyond the sky...
that's where imaginations fly...

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: July 3, 2016 )





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