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birds
have
wings unbroken
we
climb
the
mountain sides
unspoken
but
stars
sometimes
we die
when
we
fall
from
the
hidden sky


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The following comments are for "When We Fall From The Hidden Sky"
by FireFly747

Traveling Money
when stars fall...
through the holes...
in the sky...
birds with broken wings will fly

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: June 24, 2016 )





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