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There be no rest
for the winded storm...

whipping up mammoth clouds
to stir the plains...
with twisting plows of mangled tragedy

planting row after row
of crackling disaster...

tossing houses and homes
left and right...
while ripping my heart a new one

� G.Dean Stevens

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